Thursday, August 20, 2009

after the snow (Original Rhyme)

Felt like spring, on the earth that you walk,
Simple conversation, every time we talk,
Make my heart tender & undo this lock
The one that was so cold, as solid as a rock.

I tend to get lost deeply in those eyes,
Would try my best, to avoid them from cries,
Try to pace myself and be more wise,
Trust and honesty, while avoiding any lies..

Hope you are happy, now that I’m around,
Heads up little princess, push away the frown
Even though we’re apart, in 2 different towns,
My love for you, would never ever drown…

5 comments:

kupukupu said...

I like dis:
I tend to get lost deeply in those eyes,
Would try my best, to avoid them from cries,
Try to pace myself and be more wise,
Trust and honesty, while avoiding any lies..:'(

Unknown said...

it is really amazing i love it...it shows how much you love her and how much you care about her by avoiding any lies=>

ina said...

lovely =)

Anonymous said...

pink flamingo alert^_^

simply j@a said...

i tried my best.
tho theres always a room for improvement.
thanks for showing love on the peice.
but im only human.