Friday, June 19, 2009

Tombstone of Hope (Original Rhyme)

why do we bother, doing our best,
when the best is not enough, even considerd less
been working so hard, can i have a little rest?
instead of doing clean ups, of other peoples mess..

to me its not fair, to be treated like this,
why must i make way, to all request of his,
what about my freedom, what about my list?
Something I want to achive, but endup being piss...

but the hope is gone, nearly ever since,
everything done is wrong, it has always been,
ill just keep quite and let them win,
at least i did my best, but be treated so mean...

2 comments:

fizah said...

yeah have felt this way before..tend not to think too much bout it..we can't please everyone even though how hard we try..and it can really get frustrating at times when you feel like u did ur very best but still its not enough..hmm how then?? close one eye n let it go?? =p

daijoubu said...

sometimes heart would say.. it's over.. but end of the day, the mind would say never loose hope. guess that's what love is all about..we fall, we rise, we crawl, we run, we laugh, we cry.. but, knowing that end of the day, His love that we longed for.. the hope lives on. Great piece Jaa :)