When can I enter, your rose garden of trust..?
Should I wait here, until I start to rust?
You act so cold, yet you manage to lure,
Just give me a sign, so I could make things clear,
Now that you’re gone, you say it’s a must,
Start to be close, but now I see is dust,
Hope you would remember, cause distance makes me fear,
I crave for you voice, addicted I got to hear..
4 comments:
oh gosh. the first two lines are beautiful!
"when can i enter your garden of trust?
Should i wait here until i start to rust"
i suka karya you ni.
regards,
Ellisha
totally luv it!!each line has its own meaning..its definitely one of my favs so far ^_^ can't wait 4 ur next rhyme..nnti i 'tumbuk' u bg inspirasi k=)
Tis is beautiful..you're like singing my song with your words..
thankz ever so much for all your comments.
if you really know the truth behind this rhyme, its abit undone.
mcm left hanging.
thankz to a certain someone that make me happy.
terus tak dapat sambung dah.. grrrr.....
-jaa-
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